One down, four to go
On my workshops I have about five this semester, as opposed to two last semester.
I completed work on one of them tonight, it’s from something I lovingly call project kurtz. There is a real title though, but I am not going to disclose it at this time.
So I figured why let my semester friends get all the fun ripping into me, next page is a small sample of the copy I consider “readable“
Looking at the Brando pic he does look like a fucked up clown, doesn’t he?
I hate clowns, I hate them more than Staten Island, Queens (the boro), Furries, script kiddies, cosplayers, LiveJournalists, and teenagers combined.
Anyway, two quick things.
- It’s still pretty rough in the way of language.
- I am well aware I put myself in. There are real reasons, since this is partially based on a true story that I was a party of I felt like I had the right. The other reason is that I feel it gives me a closer connection to the story, which really does help a bit. I’m probably going to take me out when I have the second draft completed.
